I decided to revise my project from this third unit of this course, which was on the Rwandan genocide. My paper uses Hannah Arendt’s theory of the banality of evil to critically analyze the role of Pastor Elizaphan Ntikirutimana in aiding the killing of Tutsis in the Rwandan genocide. Through this, I have attempted to understand how we assign responsibility in cases of a horrific incident like genocide.
The main revisions I made were to make my argument more explicit and concise. I restructured my introduction to give the reader a better idea of what my paper would be dealing with. Most of my revisions dealt with the structure of my paragraphs and my paper overall, as I wanted to make it so that my writing flowed better and so my paper was more understandable to the reader. My time in the course has taught me how to properly lay out my argument.
I also spent time unpacking and explaining my quotes a bit more.Project 3-Revised